My first fanfic

hyay!!! i wrote my first fanfic!! about dbsk / tvxq / tohoshinki
ooo yeah!!

i like it!

n no smut

warning!

failed fanfic

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this is ummm lil jaeho...

but failed!

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when yunho broke jae's camera

Changmin : *walks around DBSK’s dormitory, suddenly sees DBSK’s leader hold a broken camera* is it Jae’s camera? Why does it break?
Yunho : Um… it’s… umm…
Changmin : *found out the clumsiness of the leader, so he about to bully the leader* HYUUUUUUUNNGGGG!!!!!! *uses Korean* COME HERE! THERE’S SOMETHING I WANT TO SHOW TO YOU!!!! *calls the members, Jaejoong, Yoochun, and Junsu*
Yunho : *does nothing except looks at the camera, imagines about what will happen*
Jaejoong : *pants* Y… yah! Yah! Choikang Changmin! What happ… *the words are stopped by the moves of Changmin’s finger*
Changmin : *points to the broken camera in Yunho’s hand*
Jaejoong : W… what? Y… YAH, JUNG YUNHO!!!
Yoochun : *arrives with Junsu*
Yunho : *bows* I’m sorry, Jaejoong, I broke your camera
Jaejoong : *sighs* It’s because you brought it to the forest, am I right?
Yunho : Yeah… I’m sorry
Yoochun : Hey! I told you before!
Yunho : I’m so…
Junsu : Yoochun is right! It was your own fault!
Changmin : *nods*
Yunho : O… ok, I admit I was wrong
Changmin : Aigoo *uses Korean*
Jaejoong : What did you expect? You should listen to us…
Changmin : *nods, points his finger to Yunho, shakes it in front of Yunho’s face*
Yunho : *puts his head down* you’re right, and I was wrong, I was the one to blame
All : WE TOLD YOU BUT YOU WOULDN’T LISTEN!
Yunho : *sobs* It was my own fault, I’m sorry I have made a mistake
Junsu : It’s no use crying over split milk
Changmin : *nods, shakes his head, makes a noisy voice from his mouth* ckckck
Yoochun : *nods, plays with his foot* tap tap tap
Yunho : *sobs*
Jaejoong : *sees Yunho*
Yunho : *sobs*
Jaejoong : *sighs*
Yunho : *sobs*
Jaejoong : *sighs deeply and hugs Yunho* Perhaps that’ll teach you a lesson, Yunho. Don’t be a cry baby.

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